Name: Maria Loveney

Age: Somewhere around 17

Gender: Female

Physical Description: Maria is an attractive girl. She has jet black hair that falls to her knees, and black eyes. She is about 1.53 metres tall, and weights 42 kilos.

Native Realm: Sapphire Realm

History: Maria grew up in a poor family, in the country. She was raised by foster parents, since her blood parents were dead. Her mother died while giving birth to her, and her father died a few months later of a broken heart. Since then, her foster parents cared for her like their own child. When she was 15, she finally fufilled her dream of leaving the country, and coming to the city and became a courier.

Parents: Maria never knew her blood parents name. Her foster parents names were Oliver and Rose Loveney.

Siblings: None. Maria is an only child.

Personality: Maria is a guarded girl, always holding things dear to her close, and never letting them go. When she is approached by strangers, she has a tendency to, either, run away, scream, or just back off a few steps. When she feels safe, she will flirt with any man who notices her.

Items:
- 1 sewing kit (she's hopeless at embroidery)
- A light pink gown, and a light purple gown
- One nightdress; silk, light embroidery
- One light gold chain
- A harp
- A book of parchment, ink, and quill, with a little bit of sealing wax
- Hygienic effects
- She can sing very well

NPCs: A maid

Other: Nope :)

Hello there! Thanks for joining SC and for getting up your char sheet! There are just a few things that you're going to need to change, though, before you can be approved. Your physical description should be at least five sentences :D I know it's tedious, but it shows us how well you can describe your character. Also, could you make her history and personality at least 8 sentences?

I have a question, though: is Maria a courtier or a commoner? I was slightly confused while reading her history so I was hoping you could clear that up for me :D.

Also, I'm afraid that you forgot the RP sample, which has to be two paragraphs (ten sentences) long. I know this is a lot of writing and if you need any help at all, please don't hesitate to ask! I look forward to seeing your completed char sheet!